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Hmmm....the grammar's off.
Sorry but that's my first thought as I read their thought bubbles because will...its 'I never GAVE up on you" Or if we're talking future and present tense "I WILL never give up on you Jason!"
But Jason's is completely random. "Oh, you MUST to, cuz you're my daddy???" That makes no sense. did you mean "Of course you won't, because you're my Daddy" or did you mean something else like "Of course you can't, cuz you're my Daddy and all that jazz."
I'm SO sorry for the grammar lesson, but, its just the words are so distracting and kind of hide how great the picture is. But yeah, here are some suggestions.
Sorry but that's my first thought as I read their thought bubbles because will...its 'I never GAVE up on you" Or if we're talking future and present tense "I WILL never give up on you Jason!"
But Jason's is completely random. "Oh, you MUST to, cuz you're my daddy???" That makes no sense. did you mean "Of course you won't, because you're my Daddy" or did you mean something else like "Of course you can't, cuz you're my Daddy and all that jazz."
I'm SO sorry for the grammar lesson, but, its just the words are so distracting and kind of hide how great the picture is. But yeah, here are some suggestions.